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Dynamike Eternal Order FullTimer 24148 Posts 
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On 2010-11-16 15:01, magicofCurtis wrote: The Magic Café is the only place I will always come to and ask questions. I trust all the magicians here. I even trust you too, Curtis. 
Ok, guys, a few changes are now made. http://www.detroitclown.com |
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iwillfoolu Special user Upstate NY, USA 746 Posts
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That red background is bad.
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Dynamike Eternal Order FullTimer 24148 Posts
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On 2010-11-17 19:25, Aaron Smith Magic wrote: Thanks for the conversation. |
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seadog93 Inner circle 3200 Posts
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Maybe it's just me, but I really like the colors. I think they're great.
I didn't like the last two paragraphs though. If there is an advantage to lists like those I wonder if they could be put on another page?
"Love is the magician who pulls man out of his own hat" - Ben Hecht
"Love says 'I am everything.' Wisdom says 'I am nothing'. Between the two, my life flows." -Nisargadatta Maharaj Seadog=C-Dawg=C.ou.rtn.ey Kol.b |
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Dynamike Eternal Order FullTimer 24148 Posts
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On 2010-11-18 22:31, seadog93 wrote: It's not just you. It's me too. |
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Andrew Zuber Inner circle Los Angeles, CA 3039 Posts
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The red is still too visually stunning to the eyes. I work from a 24" iMac, so when that page pops up it stings. I would suggest either a muted version of the red, or finding a way to incorporate it without having the entire background be one color.
"I'm sorry - if you were right, I would agree with you." -Robin Williams, Awakenings
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Bill Hegbli Eternal Order Fort Wayne, Indiana 22797 Posts
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Well you have began to get the idea, now do the same thing with this:
Dynamo is available for all the following: Children Birthday Parties, Schools Events, Company Picnics, Easter Parties, Anniversaries, First Communions, Christmas Assemblies, Block Club Parties, Halloween Events, Library Events, Easter Assemblies, Christmas Parties, Thanksgiving Parties, Community Events, Halloween Parties, Fairs, Festivals, Grand Openings, Private Parties, Restaurants, and Reunions This is just a run-on sentence, you actually think anyone would read this enire list in paragraph format. Do the same as you did with the other box item, except you do not have to put everything in a box. By using boxes you are not making the page flow for the reader. If you can put words at an angle it would create interest as well. Reduce your line spacing as well, see how we separate ideas on the Café, but the lines are not all separate, just the paragraphs. |
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dearwiseone Inner circle Portland, OR 1143 Posts
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Still way to much text!
You still haven't eliminated the keyword stuffing! Still no separate bio page. You have a list of the cities you've performed in? Who cares? Re-read several of our posts and get that text down to a minimum! Also, get all the keyword stuffing off of your site. I'm sure you've noticed it's not doing you any good! Best Wishes! |
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seadog93 Inner circle 3200 Posts
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I agree with wmhegbli (just as someone reading the page, I'm very bad at marketing); if those last two paragraphs were made into a nice looking bullet point list I think that would look good, either in boxes or not.
"Love is the magician who pulls man out of his own hat" - Ben Hecht
"Love says 'I am everything.' Wisdom says 'I am nothing'. Between the two, my life flows." -Nisargadatta Maharaj Seadog=C-Dawg=C.ou.rtn.ey Kol.b |
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Dynamike Eternal Order FullTimer 24148 Posts
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What do you think of the videos?:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g36e9ZSl8l8 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m92vfbjqXrc http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7DcaTfMCeSQ |
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Posted: Nov 18, 2010 06:53 pm 