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Edith Regular user Germany 131 Posts |
You can find it under http://www.MissEdith.de
I know that most of you don't speak German but I would still appreciate any advice on my design. If you're feeling lucky you can also quote a price (in whatever currency you wish) that you think my show is worth based on this website. Thanks a lot everyone! |
Glenn Watson Special user 781 Posts |
Going only by the pictures,The one page makes you look like a
balloon artist.I cannot tell if you are a magician by the pictures. I just see pictures of a nice woman.I would suggest more pictures with you on stage or interacting with people with props.On the bilder page the first 4 pictures do not say magician to me. I see a woman holding a bottle, a match and a book. The way you dress is very nice but with the purse and print dress nothing distinguishes you as a magician to me. Perhaps someone in the feminine mystique section could better address attire of female magicians. |
Mr. Mystoffelees Inner circle I haven't changed anyone's opinion in 3623 Posts |
I like it! The cursive is great, and it is amazing how many different looks you have. I agree with Glenn's comment about more magic themes and dress- think you could do a mystical look very well...
Jim
Also known, when doing rope magic, as "Cordini"
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Edith Regular user Germany 131 Posts |
The cursive is my handwirting on artsy paper.
I will definately work on a magic "look". Is there a guide somewhere how to put a costume together? |
Glenn Watson Special user 781 Posts |
There is a forum on the magic Café called the clothes we wear.
I am a hobbyist but my understanding is you should first decide what your character on stage is. Are you a comical character,mysterious,a shaman,a con artist, a prankster,fumbling, a Mary Poppins type ect... The costume should reflect the character. I again suggest you ask for advise in the feminine mystique part of the forum or The clothes we wear section. http://www.themagiccafe.com/forums/viewforum.php?forum=220 http://www.themagiccafe.com/forums/viewt......m=107&30 |
Dougini Inner circle The Beautiful State Of Maine 7130 Posts |
Edith, I wrote you a PM!
Doug |
Edith Regular user Germany 131 Posts |
UPDATE:
I redid the design again. Now it's just Text except "Bilder" and "Referenzen". Do you think it looks (more) professional? (It still doesn't scream MAGICIAN in your face, but it is hard to build a design that doesn't look cheesy.) |
DJG Inner circle 1300 Posts |
I think you need to have a picture or two on the home page as well.
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